The Writers Den
The grave yard lay before me, holding deranged carcasses with a poisonous breath. Life extinct but waiting to be reborn. Burnished to a steely blue by bitter artic winds. Relics from the past. Each once breathing, living, not the decayed specimens I see today. Discarded when they no longer served. As if corrupt. Hideous in their nakedness. Their curvaceous forms waiting to be dismembered. Resting forlorn. Inflicting pain. They should have cast a miasma. But I am carrying a dream. So I discard the vilest. Someone else may feast there. Like a Dickensian grave digger I sort the best specimen, that I might begin.
Leaning over my desk, I dust down a long forgotten tome. Drifting across the pages, editing , discarding, cutting out the dross. Failure is not an option. I desire the limelight sublime for my book. Till then a humble writer I will remain. Drifting like a gentle chalk stream, unpoluted, remaining pure to my desire. To write the best that I can.
© Mike Humphris.
Footnote: After days of trying to modify my first novel length story, I needed a break. So I have turned to this weeks Sunday photo fiction prompt for relaxation. 📝
A grim way to look at editing a novel, but no less truthful!
Thank you Iain, your words encourage me.
I like the thoughts on editing. A good way of looking at it.
I have never liked cutting hard won text, thank you. SF
The surgical effort of editing has transcended to sheer poetry in this piece. Starkly beautiful!
What lovely encouraging comments, thank you so much. Salaja
Thank you so much Michael!
You are welcome Michael!
I haven’t gotten to the point of novel writing yet, but this was a very poetic way to depict editing, and a good alert as to what is in store for me.
Good job.
I always enjoy writing my first drafts. Editing, well it is just not me, particularly novel length stories .
And here I was thinking “Frankenstein”.
Mary Shelly’s Frankenstein is great.
I love this, Michael.
And I suspect that for most of us writing is a compulsion and a joy, editing is a nightmare that we try to avoid at all costs.
Bon courage.
So pleased to read your comments. Thank you.
I can entirely empathize with you plight as i too am currently knee deep in editing my debut fiction novel. Well written, Mike.
For me editing means – tea and more tea – then perhaps cut or change a word. Could I ask what type/genre of novel. Neel
Nicely done.
I am pleased to hear so, thank you.