Smoke and Mirrors
Autumn had come early to Charlotteville, Joanne could feel the nip in the air. The letters from her parents had unsettled her. Yes she knew the families history. Their journey to this world that she loved so much. Now her parents had found the portal which would enable them to return to Narnia. The portal had ended up in a junk shop in central China. Heaven only knew where it might appear next. This might be her only chance to visit the fabled world of her grandparents. Yet she loved living in Charlottesville. Now she truly had a dilemma. Should she travel by the mirror to Narnia, or stay and fight the evil which was polluting Narnia’s twin world. As she watched the sun burning away the mist, a fence appeared; on one side lay beauty, on the over was a highway to the battle against evil. She loved her parents, yet knew that she had to take the highway as her destiny.
I loved the way you took the characters of narnia, charollete to your ease.
Thank you so much…
Joanne is stil looking at the magic mirror? What. is the point if she does not follow its direction? Good that she has decided to do something on her own. Let the mirror do its own stuff.
Joanne agonized over not following her parents, but in the end she believed she had a duty to help the inhabitants of Atrae
Good on her. You go girl, take charge of your destiny
Destiny is a power force, glad you approved of her pathway.
She did what she had to do.
That is true, thank you Keith
Great story, Mike! It leaves open ended, her destiny!
So pleased that you enjoyed this snippet. Her destiny is not yet written.
This is brilliant 🙂
So glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you Kate
It is her destiny and she has to take the charge.
https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2018/09/the-fog.html
She sure has to.
I guess I would pick Narnia if I was her.
I think many would choose Narnia, thank you for commenting