Poisoned Words
Celinna had allowed their wedding to go ahead for Ben had always loved her and been there for her. She could see the minute like movements of his face, as her scent assaulted him, and the sounds of the ceremony took place around him.
Ben tried thinking that he was resting in a gently flowing river with the warmth of the midday sun on his skin. Yet distorted faces drifted before him. One particular one seemed intent on destroying Ben’s dream. It was Edward his best man and soon to be the king of a nightmare delivery.
As Edward stood up to deliver his speech Ben felt like he was dying, drowning in his own blood, as if barbed words had pierced him.
Ladies and Gentlemen, please stand for the bride and groom.
It is my pleasure to welcome the beautiful Celinna and her secondhand husband. Some of you will know that before he married Celinna he was to be my husband. Now they have stolen Cupid’s bow from me. Yet she carries my child.
Goodness I bet that speech went down well…..most engaging Michael.
Thank you Michael – Glad it worked.
Well, that’s one way to give a memorable speech. Great story!
Thank you J.A. There must have been many shocked faces.
What a speech full of vengeance. Good writing, Michael.
Thank you Neel, I am grateful for your supportive feedback on this story. I was not sure about this story.
Complicated relationships. Perhaps he should’ve chosen someone else to be the best man!
The groom now agrees with you, thank you Iain
A marriage made in hell.
The bride is blushing.
Oh my goodness! This marriage is not starting out too well! Great story, Mike. I agree with James. A marriage made in hell.
Yes I am sure that I saw the bride blush. Thank you PJ.
Weird one.
I would agree with you, my original story idea started in the year 2117. !
Edward is the worst man . revenge flowing in his veins .
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That is so true – I don’t expect to see this character ever again.
What a twist to the tale.. Some people are just too poisonous.
– Anagha From Team MocktailMommies
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Or to greedy. The artist made me think that some have lost touch with what it is to really care for nature and life.