Norway or Bust
As I looked over the gunwale at the rise and fall of the ocean, I was reminded of my home and the fells of the Dales. The captain had lashed himself the the wheelhouse. From this vantage point he poured a stream of venomous language at the three sailers who fought the control of ships wheel to maintain steerage way on the Maid of Whitby. For as long as the ships rudder and tackle held, there was hope that we might made some landfall on the coast of Norway. But in the ‘Maids’ hold the rats drowned.
Footnote: The colours of the stone work in the prompt photo, are a spitting image of a local property called Norway House. In my part of the world a living was made trading via the Baltic and North Seas.
Love how you tied this to what you saw.
There is so much untold history, and studying the people’s history is my pleasure. Thank you Dawn
A hard and dangerous life.
It was and still is. I applaud those who go to sea with just a sail.
Great action scene. I love the detail.
Thank you Gab, I must admit that I really enjoy older nautical stories.
Poor rats, no one ever thinks of them.
Except the ships cat.
I really like the descriptive, atmospheric element here, and how you took the prompt from something you uniquely saw! Really cool, Michael.
I must admit having a passion for nautical tales. Thank you Dawn, I don’t think that my writing has ever been call cool.
It has now. 😉
Incredibly graphic. How hard that must have been.
I do find it hard to understand how in the past men took the ocean to hand and fought to use its strength. Hard it must have been.
Never a good sign when the rats drown. Very well done, Michael.
No the ships cat was not happy about it. Thank you Dale
Dear Michael,
I love where the prompt took you. Atmospheric and well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Nautical stories are my passion. I was pleased when I found a prompt which allowed me to indulge myself.
Michael, I, too, like where this building took you. What a story! I never would have thought of the sea. Nicely done.
I was also surprised when the building took me to the ocean. But then I love nautical stories
The detail is amazing.
Stories about the ocean are one of my passions. I am grateful that you comments
Great detail, Michael!
Thank you Sascha, I do enjoy nautical stories
🙂
You capture the drama of the struggle to keep the ship afloat and on course. Great description.
Thank you Margaret, I do enjoy nautical tales.
Very descriptive piece. I enjoyed it very much!
I am so pleased to read your feedback, I do admit to having a passion for sailing ships
A very different piece. Well done.
Thank you so much Sandra, I have a passion for the days of sailing ships.
There is a song called “Blue bird of hull” that this reminded me of. It’s written in Swedish but I found a Swedish translation here…
https://lyricstranslate.com/en/balladen-om-briggen-blue-bird-av-hull-ballad-brig-blue-bird-hull.html
I am so grateful that you sent me a translation, thank you so much Björn. I always enjoy stories about sailing. The song had a powerful ending.
I wondered how you connected the building to a ship, so thanks for the explanation. Great story 🙂
Thank you Linda