Hard Choice
Prompt provided by Susan Rouchard
Joseph ran concrete stained hands through the stubble that passed for his hair. He looked over a rail mounted wingless plane body. His run in with the travel licensing board, had burnt out the crafts fission reactor.
It had happened, because a blue skinned human escaped capture. The authorities had impounded the machine, causing its nuclear motor to burn out. Where the hell would he get a replacement core without breaking into a concrete sarcophagi.
Joseph was glad that Storm and Lizzy had faded away escaping capture. The interplanetary authorities had too much power.
Storm, Lizzy and Benjamin are part of an earth resistance group.
Sci-fi story well narrated!
Characters faded away before getting caught. Hope they are safe
Anita thank you..Fading figures in the prompt got me thinking. ,
Breaking into a containment core seems like a really, really bad idea
So true,… I think that the core has pickled my brain, I am struggling to comment this week.
Dear Michael,
I guess Storm and Lizzy are fine swine. Imaginative story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle. I am struggling to comment on other stories this week. To tired perhaps
Love the adventure feel of this story – I think there are a couple of typos which I stumbled over as I read it, but the spirit and urgency he feels are palpable even so.
Jennifer, sorry about the typos. I am rather tired this week. I think that a cold has pickled my commenting ability this week
Vivid imagination Michael.
I really like this story and its characters so far. Imaginative, Michael!
Thank you Linda. Frustratingly I am struggling to comment this week, tiredness is playing with my thought processes
Are blue skinned humans good or bad?
The jury is out on that, but instinct leads me to think good
Well done. I hope the two escapees are fine.
Thank you Connie, so far the escapees are safe
That was an incredibly interesting and fun story.
Thanks, Michael
I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting.
Full of excitement. Not sure how the prompt got you here.
Neither am I. My story writing is not as flexible is in the past, so I often find myself drifting along former subjects.
The Blue Man Group is always causing problems and always seems to get away with it.
Benjamins colour was created by an alien force, against Benjamins wish.