Dereliction of Duty
This weeks writing prompt for the Friday Fictioneers site, is a photograph from Piya Singh.
Young Amos had worked hard below Hebden Moor to earn a living as a lead miner. Yesterday his friend Tobias had found him dead. Whilst unconscious in the door of the managers office lay Jeremiah another mine worker. Of the mines manager, there was no sign. As it was pay day, the manager should have been present.
Worse the wheel which slowed the flow of water from the tarn and so stopped it from flooding the mine had been tampered with, allowing water to enter the mine uncontrolled.
Now Tobias found himself locked up in the jail at Grassington. Charged with: Dereliction of Duty. To protect the mine and its payroll.
Foot Note
It has come to my notice that Tobias was sent to the assizes at York, but before he could be tried, he was given into the hands of a naval press gang. He now resides in Chile after being shipwrecked on the Chilean coast. Tobias married and now manages a gold mine. His oldest son has recently written to me, as he intends to visit England and prove his fathers innocence.
This sounds like it’s a real event. It has that reportorial quality
Yes, it does have a ring of truth about it. Well done.
Dear Michael,
It seems that Tobias has suffered a terrible injustice. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Someone please call inspector Barnaby.
This is a well written mystery.
Definitely sounds like reportage, but a nice set-up for a mystery.
Are we near Hebden Bridge here? Picture certainly looks right, doesn’t it? An intriguing set up – I wonder if Tobias will be found guilty?
It certainly does, however the Hebden I had in mind is a couple of miles from Grassington. It is a village with fond memories for me, I was a regular in the Clariden Pub in the 1970s.! Tobias is being used as a scapegoat by the mines senior management.
Is there more of this mystery to come? Will poor Tobias find justice?
Sadly I am not so sure he will, he gets sent to the assizes and then the navy press gets him.
I have a feeling this is a true account… like one of this lesser news on the side.
It certainly could be, I have heard that he was sent to the assizes at Leeds then taken by a navy press gang!
Reads like a true story, nice 🙂
Thank you Helen.
Poor Tobias! Let’s hope the future brings him better fortune. 🙂
Sadly so far it has not, he was sent to the assizes at Leeds then transferred to York, were the Navy press gang somehow were allowed to get hold of him. He is now on the high sea, somewhere off the coast of Chile.
Oh dear! Things go from bad to worse!
I agree, but I do believe things will improve now.
I admit that it took me a moment to get to grips with the style, but then I grew to rather like it.
Good job.
Thank you, it did take me quite a while to sort out where I was going with this story, at times for me it did not flow to well. So I am pleased that you grew to like it.
Hmmmm. Happens all the time!
It was a tough life working in lead mines
Yikes! Dereliction is an understatement
It could be a tough life, poor Tobias was innocent.
Did Tobias do it all? Wow! A hard life in those days.
Tobias was innocent, he arrived just after the crime occurred.
This is a well thought out mystery.
Thank you very much. One day soon hopefully the mist will clear,for Tobias’s son is on this way to England to clear his dad’s name.
You’re welcome! 🙂
Hahaha, love the footnote…
Thank you. This story like some other just would not lie down. The ideas just coming, so I added the foot note that fixed it, thankfully. Mike
Poor Tobias, such injustice. But his luck turned. I love the footnote, too.
The you, the story would just not shut down till I wrote the footnote.
A scary world i am glad I am not a part of.
Amazing that your story is based on truth. Well done.
Thank you, that is how it should feel with historical fiction, i am pleased to say that this story came out of my head, except for the place names. Mike
It seems injustice rules in some cases. Good realistic story, Michael, and well written. 🙂 — Suzanne