Dancing in the clouds is good,
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The quiet one was alone, wondering, nothing made any sense. She had been a bright spirit, full of energy, whilst he had been the wanderer. He had drifted around the oceans, but always he returned to her. She was his fountain of love, of knowledge and excitement. Now he realised for the time being he must drift no more. He would stay and be her protector.
Always it was the same, he found freedom and kinship, it was so natural amongst these beings, but always they aged and died, leaving him alone. Sadly he decided that time travel to this planets ocean was bad for his soul. Yet he loved the sense of freedom that living as a whale gave him.
Intriguing tale, Michael. I liked it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Cleverly built tale, Michael, but I confess that ‘time travel’ rather confused me.
Oh my, this is so beautiful and imaginative.
Oh I feel his loneliness!
This is a bit bleak, but so lovely. I too thought of sailors at sea. Glad I left it alone – you did so well with the idea.
Interesting story Michael, I like what you did with it. I also like the paragraph above about our community of writers. 🙂
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Fountain of love…my favorite from this romantic tale.
Thank you Dawn, I am glad you liked this story,
Life on earth is evanescent is what he found!
It’s true he found that memories could be tinged with sadness. Mike
Thanks!
Very cool, Mike. I like the idea and the execution. Well done!
Thank you so much. Mike
I liked the unexpected last line, Michael. He indeed was a free spirit in every sense of the word. I also loved your introduction. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
What an interesting world! A spirit from another world living as a whale–makes me want to read more!
That’s a kind comment, thank you. Mike