Baron Blackthorn
The baron incarcerated in the dungeon of his own home, had lost count of how long he had been held captive, but his hair had grown long and grey. When after weeks of labour, the ancient mortar gave way; he crawled into an abandoned passage that once allowed access to an ice house. Upon reaching the derelict ice store, it was but a moments work for him to break down the rotten door and escape. Now he had a choice, revenge or flight. He chose revenge. His hands dripping blood he tore apart a tangle of briers. Finding his clans store of weapons he selected a spiked mace and his fathers battle axe. Now his jailers would understand why you never crossed a Scottish baron. There would be many English women who would be making wreaths. The baron sold his life dearly, as he bludgeoned his way through his family’s home. Bute force saw him reach his former bedroom and dispatch the English lord who had raped Blackthorns wife and thought to rule Blackthorns lands.
175 words
Footnote. I am still unable to use the WordPress ‘like’ button, but I will read all the stories posted here this week. And will attempt to comment where able. Mike
That is a lot of story in 175 words. Waiting for the next episode.
Sadly the rest of the Baron Blackthorns story is lost in the mist of time.
Alas!
That was a great story Michael. You had me believing it was true the way you told it.
Thank you Irene, perhaps I have read to many Scottish tales written by Sir Walter Scott.
LOL
Thank you Irene
It is great that baron was able to escape and exact his revenge! Great story Mike! You put a lot in a few words and made it make sense! Great job!
Residing in the hills of North Yorkshire, I am aware of the battles fought between England and Scotland. Even today I was walking on flags upon which nonconformist parishioners sat a Vicar [the wrong way round] upon a donkey and sent him packing. I was in the village church of Haworth.
Sounds very interesting!!
If anything caught my attention at school it was history.
LOL! I understand.
I am glad he chose revenge. Real awesome story!
I really appreciated your feedback, and am pleased that you felt this story worked well. Thank you.
Intense revenge drama, narrated at a breakneck pace. Bravo!
What lovely feedback, thank you so very much.
Nice acceleration as you moved through the story Micheal.
Thank you Raymond, receiving feedback really helps a writer like me understand the craft of storytelling.
Ah, the strong Scottish man! Well done.
The lowland Scots could be fearless when unjustly treated.