The Potter’s Daughter
The day was damp, just right for working the clay that Samuel had dug out of the bank. He had sent his apprentices home, for he had been given a special commission. The priest had been quite clear. If Samuels work did not come up to the required standard, they would demand that his daughter became the next sacrifice.
Samuel bent to his work, his fingers kneed and worked the clay untill it was truly malleable. Then he built up the basic shape that he needed. Then he set to, he pared and sliced. Removing minuscule pieces to obtain the effect that was required.
As he worked he would occasionally glance towards where his daughter sat. Since her birth she had been his inspiration. His work had become desirable. Now the priests wanted a gift for the queen. One month later the sculpture was finished. As it was Samuels trade mark, he had painted his figurine. He stood back and smiled, it was his best piece of work so far.
It is said, when the priest presented this masterpiece to the queen, that she threw it to the floor. Mirror mirror who is the fairest of them all.
Wonderful story! It has a real fairy tale vibe to it.
I am so pleased with your comment, as I was aiming for an edge which had a fairy tale hint about it. Thank you so much
OMG! He escaped the sacrifice to land in the Queen’s wrath …
Heck I did not think about that, I will have to plan a rescue. thank you Reena for your review
A smashing little yarn – litereally! Nice one.
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Thank you so much for your feedback Keith
Very good fantasy fiction. You had set the scene leading up to the final line perfectly. Cheers, Varad
This is a kind comment, thank you. Varad
Obviously not the Queen.
Love the fairy tale style to this. And what a great tension, that his daughter’s life is at stake. The ending suggests that he guessed wrong about what would please the Queen, though, so… I’m hoping Part 2 is an exciting escape plan!
Thank you Joy, I will do my best.
What an ending!
Thank you Neel
Ah-ha… the danger of pride. Let’s hope she didn’t take the daughter just because.
Yes I fear the potter and his daughter must flee, whilst they can.
Now he’ll have to hide his daughter and try to escape the wrath of the queen with the big ego. Good writing, Michael. 🙂 — Suzanne
They are already on the run, thank you for taking the time to comment.
Viscious and jealous queen. I think he needs to escape with his daughter to a neighbouring kingdom quickly. Good story Michael.
Being able to creating stories is rewarding, your comment is like a cherry being put on top of a cup cake. I love cherries.