The Stones of Man
Yes it was one of those days, hot and bone dry. Jelmelda wondered why she had allowed Omo to talk her into agreeing with Adam’s plan. The inhabitants of this world were so difficult. The men were barbarous, as for the women their conversation was primitive.
Adam had left in a attempt to find a pathway back to his universe. He had now been gone for two of the earthlings years. With Omo’s help she had taught a young girl how to till the ground and sow seeds. Now at least she had a regular supply of grain. The girls father had turned out to be a passable hunter. Now Jelmelda needed to teach the girl to cook.
Jelmelda scanned the vast plain looking for any sign of Omo, he had been missing too long. He had loved to explore this world and saw opportunities that amazed her. He had turned a twisted piece of tree into a camera obscura, allowing him to trace sun spot activity. Now the locals called him a sun god.
Hi Jelmelda are you looking for me, sorry I have been away so long, I’ve found a vast river. I have called it the Nile.
I am guessing that this is part of a series,Michael?
Well picked up on. Yesterday I penned the first draft of a sci fi story, around one thousand words. [The Stones of Man] was a follow up piece.
I’m wondering what went before and after! Excellent.
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Thank you Keith, I have a draft of what happened before, but I am just not happy with it.
Any sufficiently advanced science will seem like magic — I can see how they think Omo is a sun god. And hm, I can guess what’s going to happen on the Nile… pyramids? 🙂
Spot on Joy. [the stones of man] has a history it seems.
I left a comment – but I think I goofed – so I’ll try again…
Aye, we both saw an eye! I like how you saw a camera lens.
Wicked good.
Thank you so much,
This sounds like the start of the Egyptians belief in certain gods by meeting aliens centuries ago. Good writing, Mike. All the best with your new series. 🙂 — Suzanne
Thank you Suzanne. In part that was what I hoped for. I was wondering if two aliens were stranded on earth, what impact might it have
I like this. How the Egyptians started to worship their Gods.
Just one slight error though. First line of the third paragraph – “he had been gone to long.” should be “he had been gone too long”.
Thank you, S.F; I do not think that the Egyptians would have allowed me to be their record keeper.
Although it may be accurate. The pyramids and the Nile match perfectly the stars and milky way. Or they did at the time anyway.