Nuclear Winter
Upon receiving the warning the Sullivan’s like many others retreated into the shelter under their home. Two weeks later after digging their way out through the trashed remains of their home, the blast of cold air sent them scurrying back into their shelter. For the next month each time they tried to reach the surface they were greeted by a layer of ice. Joe repeatedly had to smash his way to the surface, to remove the ice from their air intake. No one followed him, for it was pitch black above ground.
One month turned into two months and still the world above them remained completely dark. Not a single ray of light or star broke the blackness. Once Joe attempted to reach their neighbours house, all he found was the remains of shattered timbers.
Finally hunger drove Joe back to the surface. He built a roaring fire to drive away the cold, then he told his family to join him. While they kept the fire burning he scoured the immediate neighbourhood. Clambering over mountains of frozen debris, he located the external entrance to the Johnson’s shelter. It wooden cover smashed he delved deeper. Ignoring the frozen bodies, he raided the larder. The bodies could wait.
Spine-chilling, but true when survival is at stake.
As a teenager [1960s] I learned first hand about the disaster that would be a nuclear winter. The documentation I saw was very grim.
Sad that the world might come to this…..well written Michael..
Thank you Michael, a nuclear winter would be very grim.
A bleak picture, but a well-crafted one. Great story!
Thank you for your feedback, like many other writers I find it helpful to know how a story is seen.
Needs must! Compelling writing, superbly constructed.
Thank you for the positive feedback. In the early 1960s, I saw some very chilling literature about atomic bombs, it seems that it has influenced my writing of this story.
It’s funny how how stuff from those public information leaflets and adverts sticks. I don’t know whether you’ve read Cormac McCarthy’s The Road, but if you like your literature stark you might enjoy it.
That is true. I will look up Cormac McCarthy. Thank you. Mike
Great story of personal survival at all costs. Not sure that much of a future awaits them. A grim warning.
The literature that I saw in the 1960s was grim enough. Thank you so much for your feedback,
A story of self preservation. What a chill picture you’ve painted.
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Thank you Keith, chilling indeed.
Wow, such a chilling story! The end of the world story! Certainly a story of ultimate survival. Great story Mike!
Thank you PJ, It is a scenario that I really hope no individual will have to face.
Me too!
I really wasn’t ripping you off when I wrote my story. I try not to read anyone else’s stories until I’ve written my own based on the prompt. Just a crazy coincidence I guess, though my rendering is quite a bit different.
The darkness in the picture I think took us down a similar route. Then again your current A to Z fantasy offering is also my type of story.
Thanks. I’d love to read your comments about each chapter.
Hi James. Sadly since my university days, I have realised that one skill that I do no have is the ability to make meaningful analytic comments. But I am intrigued to see how you develope the A to Z story and will try to comment at some piont. Mike
Terrifying and yet it reads like a prophecy .
Not a prophecy I hope, thank you for your great feedback.
Like you, Michael, I was a teenager in the ’60s and share your feelings about the fears of that time. The term ‘nuclear winter’ was soon bandied about a lot. Great interpretation of the prompt.
Thank you Mille.
I enjoyed this story, it shows what happens when a man is Pushed to his limit. Our emotional instinct take a back seat while survival kicks in.
I was so pleased with your feedback. Thank you.
This is a very chilling story. You penned it perfectly. I could envision this scene.
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Thank you for your kind comments, a nuclear winter would be devastating for humanity
Terrifying as a possibility. At least he went to the learner first. Reminds me if the Franklin Expedition way up in Northern Canada when their boats were trapped in ice and those who died out were eaten until everyone died. A gruesome way to have life end for them and possibly the characters in your story.
A nuclear winter would be very gruesome for humanity. Thank you Mandi.
loved the tangible descriptions you could make within the word constraint that gave me the reality of a nuclear winter, the coldness, the desolation and the bodies plus the will to survive. Stark reality in a world maybe not just fictional at all. brilliant writing Michael.
Thank you so much, I do hope no one has to face such a winter.
Grim, harsh reality.
Thank you for your comment Jacqueline, it helps me to know that my writing is Ok. Thank you.
It’s my pleasure.