Kalyan
Having established a secure financial future, as much as he loved his personal accommodation in the warehouse, Kalyan decided to look for a piece of land on which to build a home. He decided on a water front location at Long Island, and purchased a disused aircraft factory. After clearing the site, he engaged Reflections Ltd to regenerated a natural landscape. Their garden designer Aaliyah arrived to oversee the work. Kalyan asked her to keep an old weeping willow that had survived the industrial landscape. Aaliyah designed him a Chinese garden. Kalyan had found his wife, a talented garden designer.
Footnote. This post updates my former story called: The Pauper.
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Dear Michael,
I guess one never knows where he’ll find love. Nice one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
So many people did not like the last sentence of a story called The Pauper, that I felt I had to make amends and write a sequel.
The comments were so helpful in reminding me that the image of a character could be altered by a throw away/thoughtless sentence.
Neat story, Michael.
I think you may have an edit problem in the penultimate sentence.
Thank you so much. Sorry about the mistake. I will look for it. I will always be thankful for any edits that improve my grammar or spelling mistakes. Mike
several grammatical issues to deal with:
He ask her was to keep an old weeping willow which had somehow survived in the industrial landscape. As she designed a Chinese garden he found his wife.
Footnote. This post updates the Pauper’s life story: I hope! . Now I am of to see if I can complete Mr Bonds story.
Randy
That is my nemesis, thank you for letting me know
Nice bit of history in so few words.
Thank you so much Claire.
Nice simple tale, well told.
Thank you, I can hopefully put this character back in a drawer!
Love works in mysterious ways…
It really does.
A garden and a wife – what a lucky man! Lovely tale, Michael
A sweet story. Love can be found in the most unlikely ways.
Sounds like a great packet deal… both garden and wife at once…
He’s a lucky chap it seems.
Aww a surprising love story!
Thank you, they were both surprised
Such a nice sweet story
I did not have the heart to give him a bad end.
What a great idea, transforming an old aircraft factory into a home.
I love seeing the transformation that some buildings go though.
An interesting wedge cut from someone’s life–this detail ended up being of great consequence to him–true to life!
True to life will do for me. Thank you Emily