1820
Now Mr Palmer had heard that a coaching hostelry was for sale. His friend Mr Hunt might see an opportunity for a business venture. Palmer did not foresee that fate would place the two men and Lydia in the same hostelry that Jack used. The hostelry was a rambling structure, added to many times over its long life. Mr Hall had stayed there in his younger days. Tomorrow Palmer and Hunt would visit the hall as potential buyers, and Lydia she would accompany her father. Tomorrow was the towns market day, a day when deals could be made or broken.
Footnote: My muse is on strike, so the above offering is from my writing book of 2010. The original story was about the history of a town in which I spend much of my childhood, hence the date…
I foresee a collision
Interesting take on the prompt. Well done.
Thank you Lindy
Feels like I fell into the middle of a much bigger story. I like all of those loose ends and wonder what happens next — and what came before.
Sorry about the bigger story, there certainly was and is. I had written about 5000 words at least 12 years back….. I reckon that at least half could be pruned away. Mike
Something tells me it won’t end well on market day.
It is true that in the short version of this story a lot goes wrong. In my original 5000 words version the plot goes on and go.. Mike
Looks like there might be trouble!
Indeed there will be.
One senses an unexpected outcome, not a good one.
Thank you Linda, their was a mixture of outcomes in the much longer version I wrote in 2011
An interesting snippet! Things are not looking good.
Keith tension is building that is true.
Dear Michael,
Market could be interesting.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Hi Rochelle, I find that markets are always interesting
Trouble is on the horizon. A nicely unfolded story Michael.
Be Safe
Isadora
Appreciated….Thank you Isadora,